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Passion's Killing Floor

  • Writing Activities Re: Character Answer Game [2]

    "I brought a white cat with me home once, but I had to let her go because the maids would have a hard time keeping their uniforms clean."-Adela "Yeah, I ...

    May 25, 2008
  • Writing Activities Re: Make Up The Worst Possible Opening Line Ever

    It all started when I went to the bathroom and unleashed the mother of all turds...

    May 25, 2008
  • Writing Activities Re: name association

    An angel or type of earth spirit that is wise and who is sought out for advice but is also like big brother, constantly looking over your soldier. Also plays ...

    May 25, 2008
  • Writing Activities Re: Title Feedback

    Makes me think of broken or glitched Androids. Oneirophobia (means fear of dreams)

    May 25, 2008
  • Writing Activities Re: Character dialogue

    "What is the incessant babel? Go read a book, then come back and speak to me about something I know. Unless people no longer read books in your time. If ...

    May 25, 2008
  • Writing Activities Re: In The Picture

    Adela's breath failed to leave her lungs. She continued walking but she was sure her follower must have guessed by now that she was aware of their prescence. Her steps ...

    May 25, 2008
  • Writing Activities Re: Ask a stupid question...

    Because he is an artichoke. How do you spell kumquat?

    May 25, 2008
  • Writing Activities Re: Make Up The Worst Possible Opening Line Ever

    Even though the only reason you're reading this novel is because I'm behind you with a knife at your throat doesn't mean you can't enjoy it.

    Mar 16, 2008
  • Writing Activities Re: Character dialogue

    What is a penny, but a mere fragment of reality?-Deimos

    Mar 16, 2008
  • Writing Activities Re: Character Answer Game [2]

    "I suppose my flaw is being a bit obsessive. The way to cure it is to get what I want."-Deimos "I'm not happy, I need to find some sunshine."-Adela "I ...

    Mar 16, 2008
  • Writing Activities Re: Title Feedback

    Sounds like a very hopeful story, maybe a little sad, with a very beautiful message to it. The Dream King

    Mar 16, 2008
  • Media Reviews Re: The Twilight series by Stephenie Meyer

    What annoys me about the casting is that it's blatantly obvious three of them are wearing wigs and it looks so incredibly unnatural. There's a right way to wear a ...

    Mar 16, 2008
  • Media Reviews Re: The Twilight series by Stephenie Meyer

    Jasper's back story was...interesting. It helped me understand and picture him better, but like I said, Eclipse seemed very forced. Perhaps it will have a larger significance in the next ...

    Mar 2, 2008
  • Writing Activities Re: Rate The Idea Above You!

    4/10 Doesn't really capture my interest and sounds overly complicated. Something I want to write based off a dream I had.: A something like love story that takes place in ...

    Mar 2, 2008
  • Media Reviews Re: The Lottery by Shirley Jackson

    I read it in my 10th grade english class. We also watched the movie. It disturbed me and I would never like to read it again. :( Though I do ...

    Mar 1, 2008


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